All Comments on 'The Catch-Up Ch. 01'

This story was a great mix of realism and titilating action. I would love to read more from you, especially a continuation of this story. Next chapter should have more detail. Would love too see more of the other characters :) keep it up!

Enjoyed it!

Eva needs more cum so she comes back to him - it needs to be written

Looking forward to more wonderful stories!

This needs a story with him or regena. Thought out characters draw attention . otherwise it's like a anime show stopping after first season. Your disappointed more then satisfied with the work

Anyone who was in band, or drama, or art, or any of the fringe groups in school could relate to this story. I have to wonder how many of us have had similar setups *smiling*

Very nicely done. You even took me to my HS cafeteria at the beginning of the story.

My only complaint is that I prefer multi-page items.

And I'm looking forward to the following episodes.

So, so, so hot...and he did not expect anything like this to happen.

I was not a 'virgin' when I graduated high school, but it was not a peer I lost my virginity to. Always regretted that I did not have the 'high school experience' some others had..oh, well.

Eca Nasty, 1/2 Egyptian, and petite...she DEFINITELY should be NEXT on AJ's contact list, or close to it!! She seems more than curious...🤔😱

And the rest of AJ' girl pals...HHHHMMMM...

I also prefer multi page tales...this was too short, yet was " short-and-sweet"!!

Five**5**Stars💫💫💫💫💫💥💥💥💥💥