All Comments on 'The Catch-Up Ch. 04'

Really nice, especially that romp with Mackenzie... Can't wait to see more.

I especially like the secret nerd lover side story with Mackenzie where he can have fun. Also nice build up and switching from more do back to a shy learner.

Once again, the best writer delivers

Loved the story, eagerly awaiting more. I really loved the interplay between the characters, especially Sadie.

Going strong! I like the love(fuck)-hate relationship with Mackenzie. I'm wondering how AJ is going to deal with Gigi - is it going to be a full reveal or cloak-and-dagger stuff? Will definitely be fun when Mackenzie clues into that. Oh, the teenage drama!

Another excellent entry. Fingers crossed for a Dylan and/or Faith chapters, hoping for more hate-fucking with MacKenzie and AJ needs to royally destroy the rest of the dance team.

Loved the chapter especially since it seems Makenzie can't get enough of AJ, definitely think him and Bridget might need to do some more exploring! Hopefully get another great chapter soon!

Great story. Can’t wait for more! The A.J. and Mackenzie back forth is interesting as well as the what happens with Gigi?

I absolutely love this so far, like honestly I didn’t even jerk off for most of it because the story and character development was so good. Keep up the fantastic writing and I hope to see more soon!

please have aj have another go with sadie

Decent body that he was oddly ashamed of, liked by everybody but never felt comfortable with the cliques who'd be glad to have him, good game but too self-sabotaging to effectively pursue, most of his friends were girls except for one high-masc dude, odd affinity with gay women, spent highschool reading instead of living...

Yeah, he came out as a trans woman a few years back. And by he I mean she. And by she I mean me.

Pls senpai

This is one hell of a story and it gets better with each chapter. This part was exceptional, especially with Bridget.

Cant wait to read more!

Love it all

Can you work in a Dylan story at some point???

love the mackenzie encounters. also seems like something building up with Eva that should be fun. maybe some group activities...

On your biography it says that you've already published the fifth chapter... I don't see it tho (○.○)

I agree with the person below me, I don’t see Chapter 5 listed under your stories.

Hi! Thanks for the comments, everybody. To those asking about Chapter 5 being listed as "submitted" on my profile, but not appearing on the site yet, I always update that after I submit my story to Literotica to approval.

It takes a few days, sometimes up to a week after submission for the story to be approved and posted. It's coming, don't worry! Keep an eye out in the next few days. Thanks for your interest!

Enjoying the series a lot so far, but the female characters are all starting to blend together and I'm not sure about Bridget, as a lesbian, training him on her like this, unless she's actually bi. The sex is really hot, 5 stars, but if you're invested in building a story, put a bit more words there.

Thanks for writing and sharing!

Very yummy, and very descriptive too. I'd like to see more with Mackenzie, that seems to be his long term objective, but having her squirm throughout is fun too. Dylan should definitely be part of his conquests, if not more. Keep it going, it's a really great erotic story! Thank you!

Really HOT!!!! Can't wait to read on with what you come up with next!!!

A great story. Love where it's going. The teaching part way funny as hell but just as hot also. Can't wait to hear more.

Most excellent fantasy. Who was your editor?

ROFL

Great story and very nicely written!!!

If you ever knew a Mackenzie growing up, then you could immediately relate with AJ. The gay friend who wants to play is cliche for a reason and I think think was done very well. Adorable really, especially her reactions after. Still very impressed with this story.

Nice, nice, so VERY NICE!!!! Sensuous, yet sexy, and erotic. Straight guy, making his lesbian (bisexual??) friend cum...cum hard...licking her so nicely!! BUT...inconsiderate of her, leaving him SSSOOO hard...

I hope Gigi is ready for the shtooping of her life, and that she does NOT act stupid toward AJ...she has obviously deduced 'maybe' he is (The Guy) who was with Sadie on the beach...

Another Five**5**Stars...ssssssoooooo good!!!!!🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😱💯