All Comments on 'The Catch-Up Ch. 05'

Hope all they hinting leads to a backdoor first for AJ.

Anyway thanks for the magnificent stories. They are a great series, and one th e best on the site in a while.

Good chapter. I want more!

Another quality chapter to your ongoing tale.

The character development and story arc are on point. Your my favorite new author

That might have been the hottest sexting scene I've ever seen on this site. Top 3 for certain.

And you TEASE for...well, teasing AJ and Gigi for another chapter, even if the resulting AJ/Sadie scene was appropriately passionate and sultry.

Undoubtedly the best author on Literotica comes through again great work.

Seriously one of the hottest stories I've ever read, this series is amazing

Just read all five of these and they are great - good writing and hot

Please keep going

Awesome story looking forward to the next chapter

I had high hopes for the next chapter and it turned out exactly what i wanted and in a way i didnt know i needed.

Favourite series and author for sure 🙌

Easily one of the hottest stories on the site! I eagerly await your next update

I love this story so much!! :) I really love Sadie, and I’m hoping that maybe you could include some anal with her at some point. The sexting scenes with Gigi were awesome too, hoping it all works out with her.

I can’t wait for more! Easily 5 stars! :)

I wonder how AJ and Amanda will hook up. She has barely been seen here so far.

And just like the others this one was fuckn GREAT! Love this series. Keep em comin (You and AJ xD)

I’m really enjoying the story! I like that it is varied, but I really like the dynamic with Mackenzie. The way that she gets turned on when he tugs her hair is so hot! Please continue to bring her into the story every now and then. I’m interested to see where it goes with the Mormon friend, and the camp too

Keep them coming i have read this start to finish and I can't wait for the next instalment

Very well written and superbly erotic! I love how he ditched GiGi for Sadie, we done! And there's hope that he'll get Bridget at some point too. Thank you!

I think I re-read this story 5 times over and I loved every second of it. I love your characters and the development of the story. It’s a nice pace. This story reminds me heavily of how a “small (underdog) guy” could also get some action. Well done, I can’t wait for many more chapters. I hope you make this story a lot spicier in the future. Lots of luck.

He should have gone for Gigi and let Sadie watch. That would have only been fair.

Please tell me there is another chapter soon!!!

Any update on a new chapter? This is like my favorite story on here and I can’t wait for the next part

Just keeps getting better and better!

Sadie is such a great character and I hope AJ gets even closer with her

Seriously hot. Stunning dialogue. Very educational. Lol.

Outstanding.

The fifth chapter of Catch-Up is perhaps the best one yet. This is an amazing series, with well-rounded characters and an excellent storyline. The love scenes are exceptionally well done, and really add depth to the story without ever causing it to drag. Wonderful storytelling by Starcall, who is definitely one of the site's better authors. Five stars!

Really enjoyed it, until the last page where they just want to be f-buddies.... Guess I'm a sucker for relationships. Still super fun story though!

Just so good!

Aaannnddd...there it is, y'all...another hot-as-hell installment in AJ's harem life...he has one revved up and waiting for him, yet he stands her up to be with Sadie; which, by the way, appears to have been a really excellent choice, I would say. Having 'public sex' like that...is SSSOOO satisfying, and exotic, and different...

Still, he has to revisit his sexting with his phone buddy; AND he has to get over himself and the idea she is gonna not like it when his identity is finally revealed!!

Five More Stars for the author and his series...🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🎉