All Comments on 'The Cell Phone Lot'

When I use the cell phone lot I will remember this story. I assume there is at least another chapter coming.

Well done with a meaningful plot, well described characters, and a hot sex scene. It was well written and believable. It is worthy of a second story.

"Surprised at her willingness to join me in my car, I was happy to oblige and I scurried to move the accumulation of mail, CD jewel cases, and a newspaper that was stacked in the passenger seat." You're waiting for your wife and haven't cleared the mail? sounds strange. Now if your wife is an exhibitionist, I can see making her wait at the curb while you move stuff, but this isn't the case. It doesn't fit your story.

You're both about 75 miles from home and considering driving home waiting for the flight to arrive? Never mind that 2 hours for Delta is six hours, but why put that thought here?

Every detail needs a reason to be here.

I've spent hours in the cell lot over the years, and have yet to meet any ladies there. But this story gives me hope for the future! Wonderful story, we're hoping we get the rest of it soon. 5 * from me.

Enjoyed the story. Thank you.

This profile serves the wife and I. Rare indeed is the story line that we both graded an A! But this one made an old married couples evening. We both thank you for it. *wink

This work is much better than the previous two I have read. However there are many mistakes throughout. And there are passages that do not fit or make sense really. Last, writing sex scenes between strangers are likely not intimate in the least so ... tears - no.

A delightful read. I loved the coincidence of sleaze. Five stars from me ~~ JBE