All Comments on 'The Challenge'

Yet another story that has no loving wife in it. When are you guys going to wake up, read the header, and realize a story based on the doings of a faithless whore and nutless hubby just don't fit this category? I'm fortunate I didn't waste all my time; when I saw how the story was progressing, I fast forwarded to the end so I could see the highly predictable and totally pathetic ending. You don't write poorly...it's just the subject that sucks, is in the wrong place, and would piss less people off were you to put it elsewhere.

there would be two dead people left in that room... so the author is just announcing to everyone that he has no concept of real life, doesn't know how to create a real life charater... so THE READER SHOULD NOT WASTE TIME READING HIS POSTINGS. If your are TOO LAZY to develop a story, DONT POST ONE.

why don't the two arseholes below, with all the other holier-than-thou fucking twats that have invaded this site, fuck off and start their own site. You could call it Bitterotica maybe.I do hate to give them the reaction they obviously crave but...

Great, sexy little fantasy. Let's have some more please. Just what I expect from Loving wives, along with many other people. Mancelt uk

Why doesn't the nutless wonder who thinks that real men with balls are "holier than thou" quit whining and go find a dick to suck? Erotica is not the enemy of pride, integrity and honor, but a cowardly closet fag wouldn't know that. The commenter below gets his panties in a bunch because some of us aren't into sloppy seconds, being married to a whore, etc., and that just breaks my heart; some may like this story, they're entitled, and can respond as they see fit...opposing views are just as entitled and a lot more sane, but some whiner getting all premenstrual over it all is too pathetic to pass up opining on....

Or do you suck? Hard to tell from your writing

This story received probably what it intended - rabid responses, because truthfully I see no other reason to write such a "story". If there had been some build up, some sort of real flow of emotion, then maybe...just maybe, it would have generated other responses. But, that the majority of responses posted are negative in their criticism should be a clue.

Author cant write so just uses the WACC formula.

If you're looking for a stroker, here it is! If you don't mind some unlikely actions and reactions, and can get to the acceptance of Sweetie's (totally stacked deck) proposal without giving up in disbelief, then this tale is hot! The sequel should be brief and involve litigation, but THIS night will be hot - and Hubby will learn to not bet against a woman with a plan!

OK let me get my phone so I take pictures for the divorce.

Real men wouldn't tolerate this conduct and...Her Attitude.

Your story, your right to express who you are.

I read para 1, sanned 2-5, read five and wished there was a minus score. This is not LW, this is Fetish or Non Consent.

Persoanally, I would have walked over, smacked her, bitch slapped him once (what's he going to do?), told her don't bother coming home and left...Permanently.

Of course, why the hell did he marry her in the first place, all they do is argue and now she cheats with contempt and disrespect?

Try again, please..

Why would anyone stay with a conniving cunt like this?

does "foul" fall into, TK U MLJ LV NV

Please stop writing you have no talent for it, this is to poor to warrant any further comment

Where is chapter 2. need the conclusion. Well done

Normal man, finding his wife in a bedroom, in the arm of another men, either walk away to a new life, starts kicking some ass or, at the very least, starts begging the cheater to stop (yeah, not very manly, but at least realistic!)

Normal man do not, however, agree to be part of a contest where his wife is the sole arbitrator as to whom would win and whom would lose, especially since she has a vested interest in fucking some strange in from of hubby, to make him pay whatever transgression he has done previously.

So you can't really feel any sympathy for the nameless narrator of this tale - essentially, he didn't at all find for his marriage. Fuck, I don't even understand how he managed to get any arousal out of that situation - a normal man would more than flaccid if faced with the same problem!

But hey - it's fantasy, isn't it, someone out there... 'hope you truly got some joy outta it, nameless simp, 'cause the rest of us certainly didn't.

Find another story plot.

I’ll give you a 2 for putting pen to paper.

Should have broken the man's face, and left the bitch there.

Pathetic

Once her husband understands that her response to them having an argument is to fuck some random man, why would he go back into the room? Their marriage is over. Why would some sex change anything? Bad non-ending.

I agree with most everyone. I would have beat the fuck out of her lover and told her don't come home because she doesn't love there anymore, the divorce papers will be served the next day. She most likely has been cheating on him for awhile since she knew HOW TO AVOID him. I really hate the writers who think that the husband MUST be a wimp and have NO BALLS. Screw that. I thought the story started off ok but soon DIED when he first confronted her and didn't do anything. 1 star but deserves zero.

No brainer!!! DIVORCE HER and kick his ass!!!

1 star - stupid cuck/wimp crap.

Obviously this author does not have any balls.

Stupid, stupid husband.

Only a fucking cunt ( male or female) would write a story like this one. To either be a bull dyke feminist or milquetoast wimpy cuckold has to be a heavy burden to live with. I'm sorry for you.

dont write till your balls drop and you hit puberty..

Divorce on the horizon. For sure. Don't care about what the wife wants. She's a fuck doll now. Move on write chapter 2 the divorce.

Laughing at all the little boys getting their panties in a wad over this

What and the MC wants to stay married to this cheating slut…. REALLY?? Get out quick & dump her ass ASAP!!

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Too short.

I didn't like it.

Another pair of sickos.