All Comments on 'The Change'

by olderhormones

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OvercriticalOvercriticalover 3 years ago
Childlish

This sounds like the fantasy of a 15 year old adolescent. Some amazingly rich young guy making a miraculous personality transformation (perhaps the author) and he and this beautiful girl fall in love after one date. If this makes the author feel good that's great for him, but spare us the childish dreams. An overly generous 2*

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I am an older man married over 50 years. I love writing stories and I hope to contribute more as time goes on.

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