All Comments on 'The Change'

maybe too perfect (and a bit cruel with the divorce terms and tongue) but I did enjoy the sweet finish.

Have read this story a few times now and enjoyed every time.

Great job!

3 stars

Started out ood , then fizzled.

Stopped reading ,' Bloody Stupid'

Average story without any kind of special hook. It wasn't bad, but it wasn't that great either. 3/5

Another well`-written and enjoyable tale. thanks for another good read

Interesting. Liked Starla. Not sure I get why Rhonda felt the need to belittle the MC when she was with Jim: "little man", "wimp", etc. That seemed totally contrarian to how she acted after thr first few days post being served. Don't get me wrong, reconciliation was not an option. But for someone who "appeared" to love her husband, and professed to do so, even with Jim, then why the derision? Guess that was the extra sauce needed by the author to push reconciliation totally off the table. Her signing thr papers and having them notarized, seemed really stupid in today's day and era, but that shows how desperate she was. Rhonda was messed up. Then moves to Ohio to be a nanny. Wonder if Haley remembers her much.

Pas mal.

Again for a great story worthy of its high scores.

4 Stars on a good story . My Great Grand father was 40 and he married a 18 year old . They had 6 kids and from what I have been told they Loved each other a lot .

Would like to meet his lawyer's aunt, she sound delightful, but she's that hot, she's probably a cougar the way the world seems.😢

Don't be down on older women, I've been a serious admirer of older women since grade school.😍

So a chick whose 24 is too young for a guy barely in his 30s what a joke. I'm sure this author has a thing for old Milfs or even Gilfs because he just loves retreads😂 And for some reason all his women characters are the same age or normally older by a few years geez talk about a type 🤔

Nitpic; she interviewed with an employment agency beforehand. She got the job because she is left handed and can teach snorkeling. Nice story, sad subject, good outcome for most. Thanks for a nice read.

Good story but I did see the ending a mile away which kind of ruined the end for me would of loved some kind of twist don’t know what but getting with Starla the guys ex was a bit cliche

I wonder was this after SS06 got married. He gave second chances and everything else after he said I DO.

How did Rhonda get a job as a nanny in Ohio without an interview?.

excellent story , the ending clenched it .

thank God you didnt stop at the split up .

five stars

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I Took My ex back after I caught her cheating on Me ,.. Worse decision of my life as She was a born Cheater . I could have beat her boy toy up anytime I wanted to .. But My Sensei asked Me if I would feel better going to jail over a Girl I no longer loved I was a brown belt when I hot Divorced and I am now a Black Belt . My Sensi said he would rather we ran from a fight then to beat a guy up , 5 Stars on a Great Story

Interesting main character, detailed emotional progression for most of the story. The new relationship lacked all the detail and depth of the primary story line. If the author did not want to put as much effort into the aftermath, which is clearly the case, then it would have been better to just skip the underdeveloped ending and end the story where the couple decide to split.

Rottweiler, I see you've never written a story here. It's easy to fault others work when you've never even tried. Try being constructive for a change. Write something and have it judged, maybe you will find that compassion inside you. The story was well presented, clear, and had heart to it. I've never written here either but I don't trash anyone for doing what I don't have the talent to do. R. Bachman.

This author consistently writes weird main characters that would rather work toward their cheating wive’s unhappiness than toward their own happiness.

It’s absolutely the stupidest thing. It’s just unbelievable that someone doesn’t understand that you cannot make yourself happier just by making someone else unhappier. You learn that in the fourth grade. Or you should have.

So you don’t want her anymore? Then get rid of her. Go on, find your own happiness somewhere else. Maybe with someone else. Or, maybe try being happy with yourself. Whatever, just get away.

But noooo, he’s got to hang around and make her miserable. Fine, if you are absolutely sure you will be better financially and legally, and you have no chance of getting caught. Most pissed-off, testosterone-amped guys are going to make mistakes. You gotta be cool, really smart, and experienced. Or else, you’re going to fuck up because you’ve never done it before and there’s something you didn’t anticipate. BAM! Things just got worse for you, shithead.

See above for financial and legal considerations.

Hilarious!!!

One of the best from you. Wonderful, beautiful and meaningful story. Definitely a five star rating. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

I never hated my wife for what she did to us. Yes I divorced her but every one else blammed her. I helped her settle into her new life but I could never take her back. Good story remember folks, its a story. Calm down.

No sympathy at all for poor Rhonda. She was the cheater, and she disrespected him every time she was with Jim. To he'll with the bitch. She reaped exactly what she sowed.

3 stars - the story was OK right up to the part where Ryan starts torturing his wife and the asshole to get his revenge. Then the crap with the asshole's ex-wife really knocked it down to a 3.

What is it with you and several other authors on here have a thing for a lousy ford mustang? The old sayings 'found on road dead' or 'fix or repair daily' did not just suddenly appear out of thin air.

Why did Rhonda stay that long in a situation that is messed up? The normal way is separating or take her back.

Why did the main character in most storys get the other spouse? Hardly heared that in my life.

Why is it in the end most about the money? Saving secret money, sueing other people or getting money out of the blue. I guess broken marriage can not be satisfied by money. Why living a normal life and after divorce you have to be rich?

Is it not more common keeping the job, getting a new spouse and live a good life?

That is not only this story, this points could be find in many stories. So is the path of loving wives stories that narrow?

The quiet good guy got the girl and rid himself of a cheating slut. 4 stars

To secretsal-

Of course salesmen don't call on customers at night. This was just to force Jim to quit rather than be fired.

I saw my father be "let go" by the company that bought out his company. (And no, he didn't cheat on my mother.)

Good story but the moment he met Starla it was clear where this would end, even with all the talk about her parents issues and the movements towards the faux attempt to reconcile.

Good story, but what kind of a sales job has a night shift? Night shifts are usually for work that doesn't need to directly interact with external parties, or for police work and emergency services.

For those of you that think this guy is a wimp you are cave men. He did not touch her or go stupid and end up in jail after he found out. He did not jump to kicking her out but he knew he did not love her anymore and did make a plane which is why he ended up winning.

Great story thank you

from the wimps of the world :-)

5 stars!!! Great ending for a good man.

SS06 I love your stories, but this one had a issue in my opinion. Ryan should have given a copy of the evidence and his lawyer's info to Starla the first time he met her, and explained that Jim lied. Jim stated he didn't care for Rhonda's marriage, so why should he protect Jim?

Couldn't get passed the middle of the second page You write some good stuff....but not this! Any guy this much of a wimp doesn't deserve a "good outcome", the way you write it!

I believe Ryan made out well in getting Starks for the cheating Rhonda. Plus he got to smack Him around a little.

GUESS WE ARE SUPPOSED TO BE ALL HAPPY BECAUSE HE GETS THE GOOD WIFE, BUT, A WIMP IS A WIMP. THIS FUCKHEAD IS A WIMP. THESE WRITERS JUST CAN'T SEE PAST THE FACT THAT MEN DON'T REACT THE WAY THAT THEY THINK THEY SHOULD. I, CAN ONLY SURMISE, THAT, MOST OF THESE LITEROTICA WRITERS HAVE BEEN THOUGH A DIVORCE AND THEY ARE THE WIMPS THAT THEY WRITE ABOUT, THEY DON'T KNOW HOW MEN REACT SO THEY CAN'T WRITE ANY OTHER WAY. TOO BAD, WE AREN'T WARNED UP FRONT THAT THIS IS A STORY OF A WIMP HUSBAND, IF YOU DON'T LIKE THESE KINDS OF STORIES, BEST NOT READ. ALSO, IT WOULD BE SO NICE TO READ UP FRONT TO BE WARNED THAT THIS IS A KICK ASS NO TOLERANCE STORY OF A HUSBAND THAT RUINS CHEATING WIFE AND LOVER WITH NOTHING, BUT HEARTACHE, IF THIS BOTHERS YOU DON'T READ.

Still a 5* +

StangStar can tell one great story and this certainly meets that standard. Poor Rhonda, have just think she was stupid, and didn't realize what she was risking. She found out too late. Roger was a predator who crossed someone who could destroy him. Good guys do win sometimes.

You are dead on, Skippy. Unfortunately I've seen both sides of this coin up close and personal. Can't be any clearer, they both suck. I can't think of too many worse things to do to someone than what happened in these two marriages. Stang did get one thing wrong though; nice guys should always finish last, it really increases your chances of the lady inviting you back again. Signed: BTW

So many stories don't tell other party cheated on

Excuse don't want to ruin. Marriage it already ruined by cheaters

As a very few stories said you are enabling cheaters to possibly keep cheating by not revealing the infidelity

All the people I know well want to know

What saying

When we first deceive what a tangled web we weave

Enough said.

Your Protagonist is truly screwed up! A pshycho! From one EXTREME TO THE OTHER!

I agree with Texas Air Force 100%, but would add communication. Trusting someone and telling someone you trust them are two different things. Loving someone and also telling them you love them, Etc. Ryan might have provided the roughness that Rhonda wanted, had she said something.

Thought I had read all of Stang's stories. I stand corrected.

Oh, and I loved it.

Very well written. Unique. Great reading. Very entertaining. Worthy of 5-stars.

nothing to add but 5 stars

Not sure what you're smoking, Stang. The first part of the story just drops into the memory hole, along with gramps n granny. Something was just kinda discombobulated about the direction of things.

I'll say this, though: at least you gave us a regular ol' stupid cheatin' bitch rather than your usual trademark reptilian dipshit from Xandar wife.

Not sure why the saccharin ending is necessary, either. It doesn't add anything of substance to the story. It brings the deeper message about the devastation of marital infidelity into rather sing-songy territory.

After reading a number of your stories it's quite apparent your just as big a fuck wad as the characters you writ about!

Ryan and Starla ...what a pair of fucked up people! The way Ryan handled his wife and the divorce really showed his true colors....I figure that he wanted Starla from the get go and was pushing his wife into the divorce while trying to make himself look great....instead he looks like a loser and an asshole not to mention just a little full of himself!! Plus Starla has a PI watching her husband fulltime....ha ha ya right...where did that money come from. Also not much of a PI if she didn't know about Jim fucking Rhonda... well....like I said those two losers deserve each other...I really feel sorry for the kids...two fucked up parents giving them life lessons....what a joke!! Good thing it's just a fucked up story!

An enjoyable story. However, as others have said, there is no way his divorce would have taken place as described. The law would have dictated otherwise.

I find you character to be, not only a wimp, but a coward, as well. His type of retribution made him worse than his wife or her fuck buddy! He should have come right out and told the parents and Jim's wife what happened. I see no chivalry in his trying to be noble and not say anything to them. Get the tough part over with and move on!

all things with spots. TK U MLJ LV NV

The author seems to have found the one factor that determines if the marriage survives. If she cheats, the marriage may make it. But, if she cheats as a way to humiliate her husband (talking about him with her lover, putting him down, verbally abusing him as if he were in the room forced to hear her) then the marriage is pretty much toast. Lots of authors point to 'trust' as the issue, but I think it is a combination of trust AND respect. If both are lost, so goes the marriage. Excellent story; 5 stars!

Loving Wives is a category for stories about unfaithful wives. The wives are always going to be having sex with other men. Some nicely and some behaving badly.

The nice guys (and gals) sometimes DO get to finish first! GREAT ONE!

They adopted each other's kids. Really? I can't imagine Rhonda agreeing to that.

I can see why this one was an award winner, which is why I chose to read it next. You know I like your stories because it's my favorite theme, cheating wife getting caught and dealt with.

Now as for a couple of the comments I read (couldn't go back and read all 100+ of them!) One said about the 20 years ago, Rhonda's mother got pregnant with her. That discrepancy in the time line did put a bump in the road for me too. But the one that complained about your grammar and spelling, I don't see it. And if you've read my comments on here, I'm very anal about proper grammar, spelling, and word usage.

5 *'s

The total vindictiveness when he attempted to have them have sex in front of him after they were caught does not go with his character.

The big dust up between her parents that ended up producing her--the third child--was only twenty years prior, and yet she calls the 24 year old nanny being interviewed, "young."

The holes in your story are monstrous, as is your spelling and grammar.

Need to fix 'em.

Not my favorite. The poor, guy gets too much and changes too much (for me). The part about trying to fix things and then coming to an understanding makes sense. But -- in my experience (all but nil) women who are cheating don't talk about their mates much. If one did, and she said the belittling things Rhonda said, well, that would by itself be a deal breaker for the marriage. There's someone falling off the wagon, and then there' someone falling off the wagon and being nasty about it.

Not a bad story - just an unrealistic one. I guess I have to give the nod to the fact that it's a fictional story. The reality is this. Number one - in real life he would have been arrested for assault and battery when he struck Jim and caused him to bite off his tongue. Maybe even done some jail time for it. Number two - I don't care what Rhonda did or who she fucked. She would have gotten primary custody (she was the stay at home Mommy), alimony, child support and the house until their daughter graduated High School. She would also get half his retirement and 401k. So there would have been no way He and Starla ever got together. He had no place to live and given the money going out he would not have been able to move into Starla's house and support them all on what was left. Number three - how could Starla be stupid enough not to know what Jim was doing during the day? She was a stay at home mommy. Didn't she ever wonder what Jim was doing during the day over at their neighbor's house? Too many holes in this one to make it a good read.

maybe, just maybe, he was shaken hard enough to leave his wimpy enabling in the past.

and Starla needed a better PI if she didn't know about the ongoing affair with Rhonda.

The nit pickers are at it again I see. Good writing as well as good story. Thank you SS06. Cheers! c29

A complete waste of time, reading this gibberish. Obviously written by a wanker.

Dear Anon according to you only the stranger men's creampie eating cuckold husbands are not women hater.

The "hero" had it coming. He is not a wimp but an idiot. He has his share of responsibilities in what happened but is too thick to understand and too convinced to be the perfect american quiet man type. She did wrong, yes, but he was worst. Well, the plot completely artificious, above the lines, the charachters black and white, the conversations build to have him always right and the wife always stupid and wrong...a story perfectly in line whit others written by this author. I read them now and then to see if he is maturing a little but..... Kind of taleban type man.

I've been very critical of the recent stories this author has been putting out. Re-reading this one confirms that some of his older stories are MUCH better than the pulp mill stuff he's been putting out recently.

good story but with some questionable details:

how could the PI "rig" the house with her there?

never heard of such a thing as hours for a sales job esp a midnight shift

how did Ryan marry Starla without her being divorced? (it was mentioned much later with few few details)

It was awesome. Just had all the twists and surprises a story needs and besides it was consisted of very well described characters.

Didn't ever occur to Rhonda that if she wanted some occasional rough sex to actually ASK for it?

Once your "Hero" blamed others for his actions, you lost me.

Adopting each other's kids (especially Haley) was too much.

Despite the claims of the naysayers, sometimes people DO change. The character of Ryan was set up well. He was a "sleeper". He was tough, he simply did not flaunt it. Yet once awoken, they met his wrath.

I've known people like this. You should not trifle with them.

Too bad Rhonda did not recognize it.

Yes, SS06 tends to rush the meeting of the "replacement" spouses, but the story is enjoyable and even possible outside of the timeline.

but ok

a resounding 3***

At least he was happy in the end. He thought he had the woman of his dreams but she turned out to be a nightmare. Now he has the woman and the life he wants. The asshole cheaters are alone. Fuck 'em.

LOL. I have not read this SS06's story earlier. Good story and an answer version to lucsmith's humorous story " Let the Punishment Fit the Crime". BTW 5*****

Nice fantasy for a wimp who wants to trade up. The truth is, this is really a story about a guy married to a fat chick, who would prefer a trophy wife. In order to achieve that plot goal, you have to destroy the other spouses to get them out of the way. Yuck, this is the fantasy of a narcissistic wimp. If he really loved his daughter as much as he said he did, I could understand him keeping a failed wife. I could understand him living with the pain for all those years so his daughter could have both her parents. Some might call it wimpy, others might see the strength in a man who could accept such a burden to protect his child. It would demand that he actually try to love his wife, if only as a demonstration of his love for his daughter. There would be no "happy" ending for him. There would likely be a crummy sex life. A lot of sad moments when he found himself alone in his car, or in the shower where thoughts about how your life is going seem to come to you. There would be the first day when his then teenage daughter start pushing her parents away, as she became and adult and he was less needed than before. There would be the final day, when she had gone to college, or got married, when the question of what he was doing living with the failed wife would once again have to be answered. This is a real story, one that many have lived. There is a ton of drama and feeling in it. Certainly more rewarding than a fantasy.

So Rhonda finally gives up, signs the papers, leaves her OWN kid behind, moves to Ohio to take care of someone else's kid, becomes BFFs with her ex and his new wife. That about it, right?

What a tacky .. maudlin .. and 'Bollywood' class 'tragedy' (do not want to write bluntly ..).

All the female cooks and maids are flooding with tears in reading?

- Sorry.. This can not be read through to the end ..

ryan is a major idiot and desrves anything he gets! maybe he should take some time to get to know a woman before he thinks he wants a relationship with them. typical stupid male thinking with the wrong head! gives real men a bad name! well written and enjoyed the read i guess thats the important thing.

you're story missed it. Starla's physique wouldn't have been enough to turn off his love for Rhonda, and regardless of his anger and sense of betrayal he wouldn't have just stopped loving her. His daughter would have been that love connection. A two year old girl would have been too personable to treat like some loving teddy bear. I doubt Rhonda would have given up without going the whole year, and then putting the two of them in bed together would never have been something he would have done.

Ever heard of the phrase, "if it ain't broke....don't fix it"? These stories are fiction and they work so well because there are a lot of genuinely nice guys out there that just get fucked over. It is nice to read stories where the good guy comes out on top for a change. Besides, which one of us nice guys wouldn't mind ditching a cheating woman and riding off into the sunset in a new Mustang GT and a beautiful brunette in the passenger seat.

Wonderful, caring gentle man has cheating wife. Wife's lover gets physically hurt by husband. Husband toughens up but, by being wonderful, earns the love of a true angel.

How original is that storyline? Not even the tiniest little bit. A poor effort from someone who ought to be writing much better stories.

neither is the greatest of feelings, but really necessary/ TK U MLJ LV NV

they may re-evalute the parameters. TK U MLJ LV NV

Huecuck, the "Rain Man" of cuckoldry, is a sad attention whore who can't spell or compose a complete sentence BUT he is an excellent driver - dad lets him drive on the driveway at Wallbrook.

He's still mad that his wife gave birth to my kids just like his mom did. Boy do slut run deep in anoncuck's family.....well I'm finding out as we speak. His sister is in the middle of a DP with me and a few of the fellows.

I agree. If he had thrown her out immediately, he would have been honorable.

Instead, he offered a 'chance' for reconcilliation which was false and fake from the get go. That, to my mind, is dishonorable. Either offer her a real chance or get rid of her. In my opinion, he didn't offer her a fair shot after promising one. If you aren't going to follow through, don't make the promise. Using that time to torture his wife isn't cool in my book. Throw her out if you don't want her.

Thanks. tom anon

he has the PhD in cuckdom, lives in Cucktown, rides the cuckbus, and can identify every flavor of creampie known to cucks. Sorry FD45, if the "Master of all that is Cuck" and top cuck in the WBC says you are a one of his own, I guess you are.

your fucking nuts dude, Ryan didn't make that lying whore jump threw anything fucking hoops. He needed to get rid of her from the beginning, instead he let the parents talk him in to giving her a chance.

I liked it. Personally I wouldn't have moved the whore back in but it seemed to fit Ryan's torchitude. My only regret is that it was so long between posting and my reading it.

As always I score based on quality as I see it rather than my level of agreement with the ending -

A really well written story that makes me angry at how the author worked it out is still a well written story -

This time I am somewhat ambivalent about how the "hero" dealt with his now Ex - she got a chance to prove her worth, his pride meant it probably never stood a chance - OK he gave it a shot - sorta - kinda - maybe?

I am non-too worried about its impact on a stupid selfish woman who would be so disloyal, disrespectful and betray her husband so completely, as for how he treated the "other" guy - fuck him. The guy comes to his house sits at his table, screws his wife under his nose, belittles him and he should what be nice and helped the bastard - not likely. All of it from both of them because he is a decent human being who puts others needs ahead of his wants - yeah well "Burn the Witch" and her boy toy.

Mostly I like the way he put his daughter well being ahead of all else -

He was done wrong, but he turned into a very vindicitve bastard...which you made as part of the story, granted. But why have him create an endless supply of hoops for the wife to jump through for a year? He became the liar.

I am reminded of the Bugs Bunny episode where Yosemite Sam has an endless amount of doors to open before the last door shows a cannon. The problem is that the wife was a much more sympathetic character then is Yosemite Sam. This is what Ryan did to Rhonda.

Oh. I'm as guilty as hell in doing this too, but please stop with the same first letter for a lot of the main characters. You aren't the only person who does this, but some readers have trouble following who is who when you (pl) do this.

I referred this story to my grown children as an example of "what could be your life IF..." Realistically written. Well done.

Thanks

I come on this site to get fuel for my masturbation sessions. I hate stories that take too long to get to the sucking and fucking and I usually am bored after the first page but THIS story was so awesome that I read the whole thing, DIDNT even masturabate and was happy at the end. This is a great read! Thank you for being such an awesome writer.