All Comments on 'The Changing Dynamic Pt. 02'

Keep on going, this is an excellent story.

An editor maybe, to fix up the mixed ways you present conversations, changes style constantly, really interrupts the flow.

The Dom/Sub stuff is okay, but please don’t go down the BDSM path. There were times when I seriously felt that I was totally losing interest and wanted to walk away. You lost a point for that. 4/5

Really enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to some even kinkier sex? I did not notice any issues with flow the other comment mentioned. Looking forward to reading more.

Not being an English teacher, I have no technical comments. Fantastic story line. I think this is rather light D/s compared to other stories on this site. Personally, I am really not seeing BDSM. I greatly enjoy watching the relationship progress, the feeling for each other change. Please keep sharing this with us, thanks.

Thanks for the kind words all. Part 3 is down my list of priorities currently but when I do get to writing it, I’ll review how I phrase conversations so it reads easier.

Awesome story, well deserving of 5 stars.

Too BDSM for me. A little romance and true affection would have gone a long way to making this a better story....

Submissive hot sister with dirty talk. Possessive. Care.

It was a good story. I was looking for something like that. Thank you very much for your creativity

that woman is one of the hotter characters ive read lately. well written. normally wouldnt find much appeal in the power dynamics but you certainly made it work. not a typical love story but damn, im looking for part 3

Well written and a 4⭐️ story here,, this needs to continue for one more chapter

Congrats, your way to describe the situations are explicit and exiting.

As many other, we are expecting for the new chapters.

I guess, in the on coming parts, the sharing fantasy makes come true for her, probable with Rachel due she is free again, I'm not talking abour Ntr, (sharing with other males). I likes more harem things. Anyway is your story you cam make what ever you like.

Again, congrats and thanks for sharing.

Btw Happy new year to all.

Excellent story, its good there's some balance in their relationship, I hope it stays that way and they will not go into hard slavery stuff, some romance is nice too.

Please write more to this story, I would really enjoy seeing where and how far they could take their relationship. Thank you.

Please continue this when or if you have the capacity. Lovely beginning.

I love this story, the characters and the developing relationship. I'm usually not into incest, but you totally make it work! Please write more about Steph and Dan soon :)