All Comments on 'The Changing Dynamic'

I hope you have more of this already written, or outlined...

Quite good.

Five for you

Absolutely amazing story!! Easily one of the best I’ve read. Please please continue it!

My 2 cents

I like how you developed the characters. I like the flow of the story. Please continue. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Awesome! Can't wait for the 2nd part.

Very promising start, continuation is definitely required! Keep up the effort, thanks in advance

Good stuff

Definitely needs a second or more parts.

damn!! can't wait for part two!!

I auto dump on BDSM or dom/sub EVERYTIME! 1 star

Hope this goes for a lot more chapters, has a great start!!!!!!!

Please don't let this end here.

Simply incredible storytelling!

That is one of the hottest stories i have read here!!

Love your writing style. Keep them coming!!!

Outstanding!!! Please keep adding chapters to this story.

Please don't go the sharing territory, it's especially iffy to solve it with someone he trusts but not knowing they are siblings.

Can't wait for the next chapter! It is great.

Wow… I hope this is continued and quickly!!!

Great first chapter. Looking forward to next chapter

I agree with NO SHARING, Looking forward to another well written chapter.

Very good with excellent structural story line. You have obviously had some experience putting sentences together. Really like the premise and the lead up. Not sure about the mention of sharing but that is for you to decide. Definitely looking forward to seeing more of this story.

F*ck yes! More, please

Loved it.

A good story isn’t worth anything if it’s not readable.

The run on sentences and paragraphs make your work indigestible.

I suggest a re-edit for readability.

Terrific story, great buildup. I'm not even into dom/sub but I really loved your storytelling.

This is awesome.

Agree with EZ8lt's comment. This is a special bonding that would be damaged with a third party unless it was their mother

You are a tease ,more please

Excellent start to what could be a nice hot sibling romance. Please dont take dom/sub shit too far, its a real turn off

Looking forward to the next chapter. Don’t make us wait too long!

Really, really good story!

Auto dump BDSM stuff / where the word slut is used...

Atleast have some respect for the sanctity of a consanguinamorous sibling relationship, for fucks sake.

I have never really been into a Dom/sub relationship or had any interest in doing so. However if this really is what it would be like… I may have a change of heart.

The pace at the beginning was a little slow but as I read further, I fully understand where and why the pace was set. I there could be some suggestions that could come that would help your non-sexual buildup. At times it felt clumsy but with the way your story is going… I wouldn’t hardly change a thing. For me not being a so-called fan of the Dom/sub genre, you have peaked an interest for me that I never knew I would like.

Fire stars all the way

Better get to crackin on part 2 now that you left us on that enormous cliffhanger. If Dan doesn't hurry up and dom his sister, I will!

In general I am hit or miss on BDSM, I think this was very well done and I will be extremely disappointed if there are no additional chapters.

I like that you showed both perspectives and it being about control (both having and giving up) as opposed to abuse and that the brother recognized about establishing trust and maintaining trust while pushing boundaries in the future. I hope you can continue to show both sides.

Wow, what a great story! you described extremely well how their relationships were developed. I think you definitely should write part II.

Very good story!!! Please please please continue!!!!

Don't keep us in suspense. N voting until the end draws close.

Excellent! Good flow with the story. Part 2 needs to come soon.

Very detailed, good banter, and interesting characters. Not the usual tripe. I'm surprised how much I liked this, but it was unique, and looking forward to you continuing.

I'm normally not a fan of dom/sub stuff but i found myself really enjoying this story and these characters. looking forward to reading more.

When it comes to BDSM, I'm NOT a fan. My father beat the hell out of me when I was a kid and claimed that it was discipline. But it was too far across the line and I sometimes got beaten for no good reason at all. It was absolutely abuse, pure and simple. While I recognize that I'm certainly a DOM, I'm extremely sensitive to abuse. So some of the things that you described in your story felt wrong to me. In my opinion they crossed over the line from dominance to abuse. Anything degrading or humiliating is abusive. I didn’t drop your score to a one, but I didn't enjoy the story either.

Excellent, defiantly keep the story going

That was a very enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing your writing.

I enjoyed this. I read comments before I leave one because I would hate to say the exact thing someone else already said. Lol it sucked to read the comments and see people who kept reading after seeing there was some BDSM involved and were upset about it. Lol don't let that discourage the good work. Those people could always just stop reading, just like I did their comments.

Your bizarre way of formatting dialogue, not always, but just whenever you feel like changing, is really annoying. Either learn to write properly, or stick with the bullshit script model, but pick one.

Submissive beatiful sister. Can it be better? Thankyou its so hot. I love dirty talks