All Comments on 'The Chase Ch. 02'

This story definitely needs more chapters! It's so good!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!! I'm obsessed with Cameron haha PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update!!!!

YES. I freaking love this. This is my jam! Your writing, pacing and characterization are excellent! I love love love Tessa's mixed feelings about Cameron that I think most women have about men--the desire for him to be intense about his feelings for her, but perhaps not THIS intense (I thought it was very funny and understandable when she wanted to tell the actors to chill the fuck out). I like that she's aware of how it's a bit much already, but that she explains it away by thinking it's possibly just that beginning phase of the relationship and it'll eventually dissipate. It is a very believable explanation for the situation we read about in Chapter 1. I'm dying to know how Cameron knows Tessa already. I'm guessing school, perhaps, but we'll see. Thank you for another wonderful story.

Incredible ! Wow,