All Comments on 'The Cheating Game 01'

If its no big deal, why have an affair? Unless, of course it IS a big deal...

Before you unload on the author too much, remember this is only chapter one, and it is starting with the (sorely abused) husband seeing a woman who he finds really attractive. This could go in a direction where the new woman ends up with the slut's husband because she doesn't control her urges.... wouldn't that be poetic justice?

I can guess where this might be going in the future installments. Seems interesting, sort of. I'll wait in judgement.

turn out boring like Bored Fran. Both of his stories need a great ending to pull them out of the wimpy column.

First, if it's a true addiction, there is counseling to help with that.

Second, if she wants to be treated like a slut, get fucked like an animal,TELL him! Most guys would like to do that, but are afraid their wives will be pissed off.

Interesting start. I can't wait for the next installment. Keep writing!

Throw us a bone. The main character has to at least have one sexual encounter before you end the first chapter. This is not a good sign for Chapter 2.

Going over marriage vows 3/4 of the way through; character left out "forsaking all others." Key vow that cheaters like to overlook & disregard. Loyalty is key to a true marriage. Open marriage; not really a marriage, just a couple living together with benefits. He's weak & unwilling to put her in her place (another version of "tough-love") and, she's nothing but the village bicycle; everyone's had a ride.

Not one single interesting, clever or entertaining thing in this whole mess. A complete waste of space.

that might have led to a better than average story is incompetently and lazily executed.

He is settling for less than what he deserves.

... so horrific that I just have to read on.

I won't even bother reading the rest what a waste of mine and your time could anyone possibly call themselves a man after this and multiple times " shoot the bitch and then he can service all the other personers like the bitch he is"

You dont like it... why are you reading this type of story . Such vindictive stupidity. Read elsewhere OR be constructive. Simple.

I do think it's wrong to bomb the author. At least he or she was making an effort and posting something, unlike most of us that sit on the sidelines and snipe. But I don't think it's wrong to express a dislike for the story. Whether it was badly written from a technical standpoint or it was a bad plot line how does an author know what went over well? This was the latter. Why would the husband accept having a cheating slut for a wife? Why be married. I simply don't like this particular storyline. A wife that clearly demonstrates by her actions that she has neither love or respect for her husband. And a husband that won't really do anything about her cheating. What about his health if she brings home a nice disease? Why is he wasting money tricking the whore? It makes no sense. It's totally implausible. That's why I hated this story.

Great story, been there.

Cumsucking cuckwad.

The story about the wife's cheating is secondary to the husband's choice to play this game with her.

Pretty bad story.

Stories like this make me want to vomit, entertainment value zero⭐️

I feel dumberer by reading this shit! ⭐