All Comments on 'The Cheating Whore Wife Pt. 01'

The village idiot wrote this story. It suckss ass too.

terrible

Was waiting to see what was going to happen, and nothing.

chpt 1 ok doen writting.. jesus christ

5 stars, Great Start! What a good plot. The only issue was a few missing words. That happens man, that is why they are always screaming about getting a proof reader. I don't really have one myself. sometimes I can finally get the wife to check out a story for me. But don't be discouraged my friend. Let's have the next part. You have a good start now. Thanks, Buster2U

Poor writing. Please use proof read and read it yourself to see if it makes sense. Again another whore that is only satisfied with a BBC.

Please consider an editor

WWWWWHHHHHAAAATTTTT A CLIFFHANGER!!!! IT'S A GOOD START THOUGH.

FTDS. Its been a year.

Proofread what you write.It takes too much effort to guess what you wanted to write.

You need an editor. I might be able to help you.

"He should get tuitions from you." Wtaf?!? I quit reading after that. This was so painful. Don't bother with an editor, just go back to school. 1 star.

Where part two. Finish it up

She's fucking another man and the wimps first thought is, what's she doing, am I not enough for her? Load of bollocks from there on.