All Comments on 'The Cheating Zone 10: Run!'
by saddletramp1956
- 39 Comments
fritz51over 4 years agoLove this series. Good job, S.T.
May I please have another?
Whenilikeover 4 years agoI really like your cheating zone stories, they are entertaining and are set up very well. This one had a good premise and concept, but fell short in in some areas. Most notably in the buildup. This needs to be a short story, 2-3 lit pages max. But you are missing a small plot point that builds reader excitement for the maze scene. Which I did enjoy. Next the conclusion fell flat to me. Unlike many of your other stories with very good endings in this series. Please continue writing in this series as I really enjoy the stories. Yes you have to suspend belief, but the way you introduce these stories it makes them enticing. Thank you.
sbrooks103xover 4 years agoEven without "The Cheating Zone," how did she plan on explaining a pregnancy to her sterile husband?
Skubabillover 4 years agoI keep telling myself I shouldn't like these Cheating Zone stories. Truth is I love them and have never missed one. They are unrealistic as hell but so entertaining.
robroy93over 4 years agoMy first trip to the cheating zone, and it won't be my last. Great story.
TheKrrakover 4 years agoThey are so fun and full of payback.... please keep sharing them with us.
5/5
Buck1974over 4 years agoGot to say this is the saddletramp we know and enjoy to read . That was just something else but it was you and that why I enjoyed it . You didn’t stop you went in with all guns blazing and had fun writing used your imagination and look at what we got a fantastic piece of writing what I enjoyed so well done keep up the great stories and don’t slow down . I want another one from you tomorrow lol ( just kidding) .
neilnblowme2over 4 years agotoo bad a show like this wouldn`t last long on tv
the ratings would actually be much too low
the way our society is today there would be more participants in the maze than viewers
it is sad that our society accepts adultery as a norm
maybe there should be a law prohibitting MARRIAGE hence we wouldn`t need the maze
i wonder if 100 people would march in a protest against that law .... i have doubts
5* hundreds of hardons and lots of tingling in the loins
keep them comming saddle
Nipplesandwineover 4 years agoThere was one each week like the tv show! Thanks for a great read.
Rockyderek_caover 4 years agoWell if only we could really do at least some of this to at least the callous hearted cheaters. Personally I’d have preferred for lover boy to fall in the water and have his nose and dick bitten off and live...... haa haa haa! Mybe more booby traps that maim instead of kill.
Anonymousover 4 years agoThe Running Man is perhaps my favorite Schwarzenegger film. Thanks for bringing it to mind. Richard Dawson was great as the slimy host of the show. His character definitely would be a cheater. The Austrian Oak's vengeance on him and his henchmen never fails to satisfy. Who knew then that Arnold was destined to become The Governator?
Great story, just wish it had been longer. Its always fun to spend time visiting The Cheating Zone.
5*****
Anonymousover 4 years agoThanks saddletramp, maybe they should be in sci/fi but as it's married people have extra curricular then it does fit here too. However, I enjoyed this new installment.
lee5456about 4 years agoPlease please please write a lot more stories of the cheating zone. Every one of them should have a million stars.
Anonymousover 1 year agoOK They are trying to get her pregnant, but what is a blob of cum doing on her face. That won't get anyone pregnant.
Rimmerdalover 1 year agoWait Wait Wait............No 'Attack of the Killer Lasagna'????
Loved the tie-in with 'Running Man' and Rod Serling.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoHehe. Memories of the Running Man. One question? Six months of near constant fucking and she didn't get pregnant? Either Darren was sterile too or she was barren.
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