All Comments on 'The Checkpoint'

Definitely enjoyed the read. The story could be based on a number of actual events. The characters were realistic, sympathetic, and relatable. The story was well paced and respectable in length. A nice story of a time when people came to America and put their skills and talents out and not their hands. Well done.

This was a very good story. Thank you for writing it.

Calibeachgirl

One does not expect a story of bravery and caring on a porn site. What a lovely tale.

People caring about each other despite differences - such a neat concept. 5*s.

Absolutely a beautiful story about war, and the people that are in it. Truly surprised that Hank never married, and I thought that little French nurse was his for the taking. Funny how life turns out. Five Stars!

This is the first non porn story I have read on here and I enjoyed it immensely as escapism. The title got me interested and away I was in fantasy land.

Thanks for writing. As a Military Historian of sorts, it's full of holes, but that is not the point. It entertained and was enjoyable at for that I Thank you.

PP

Excellent work and a great read. It was probably a bit too easy for them to come to America so soon after the war (it took a friend and his family 12 years to get approval to emigrate from Germany to the US), but you never know.

Thanks for writing and sharing this tale.

I genuinely felt for all characters here. Thank you for writing this and I hope you've continued to hone your craft...I'm excited to see what you write next.

Be well

It was beautiful. Thank you

Good story. just a bit weepy at the end, Only a few details struck me. Should have been Magazines not Clips. I guess the Germans were using their Assault rifles rather than the 98 Mauser. Oh, the standard uniform for the Germans was Grey, 'Field Grey' or as they would say, Feltgrau, not dark green.

But a good read over all. I like it.

The ranch was given to a conservation group and never saw cattle again and was managed by some greenie from California. How sad some young man like Hank did not get a chance to operate it and save it for future ranchers. I heard it all burned off again last year. It was a good story you built up Hank but could not help saying rural people are not capable. I am sorry its just a hot button for me.

Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

Enjoyed the read. Thank you.

Excellent read!

Magnificent.

Absolutely riveting story. And I’ll admit to tears in my eyes finishing it.

Wonderful story!

5

There may be victors in a war, alas, there are no winners, but all are losers.

Thank you