All Comments on 'The Cheerleader and The Coaches'

great story please continue

For the love of fuck! More please!

For God's sake, each of you take a hole and let's make her cheer.

WOW!

I love the fact that they're all hot. People like attractive people, makes everything better.

Please continue ... maybe enslave cheer bitch captain too. Jane sandwich...yummy!

This is a great story. As was your previous entry, also a favorite. Your efforts are appreciated.

The quality of your grammar is really top-notch. The correct use of the subjunctive mood, the proper use of "lay," I could go on. I hate it when I see awful grammar on here, so nice job.

continue this

Really good form, good characters, great build-up. But a real tease. Just too short.

so fucking hot! i came and moaned loud as fuck! i never have moaned to porn or anything before this story! i love it

A great scenario, which could have easily run for a number of chapters, even after she had been punished the production of the choreography sheet could have placed three further girl's in a rather painful position and would explain the errors she had made.

This was honestly very hot and very well written. The only thing that would've made it better is if was longer, or had more chapters. I would've very much liked to see what happened next.

Very hot!

Next chapter please...