All Comments on 'The Cherry Poppers Ch. 20'

Very Nice to see this excellent chapter. Will the New Doc miss things up?

That was another great chapter that you wrote. Question I have will the new Dr. mess up the system? I can hardly wait to see what you do with Beth and the other two girls at the baseball game? I hope you write the next chapter soon.

I have been a fan of all your stories.

You have improved your writing skills in my opinion.

I am wondering as to where your foreshadowing is going..

I can't see this turning out very well for any of the participants. I think it's fantasy time has to turn to the hard truth and the bad feelings that will bring.

I stopped reading this story awhile ago because it's a little far fetched. I happened to look for your name hoping to hear back from Jenny.

Hope to hear soon.

And good luck with the outcome.

Keep it going dude, get Beth to ok Jason being in the competition. He is so good at deflowering it is like his civic duty or something.

As always a great chapter, can't wait for the next one. Maybe you could get Beth involved in the action more...