All Comments on 'The Chill Pill'

Great story!

5

Definitely five stars!

Beautiful job, as always.

Liked this one the first time I read it and I think it's even better the second. Clever idea and so easily written, easily meaning it just flows along so naturally.

Lovely story.

I know that trap, all work and children, so you neglect yourself and partner.. If only it were always as simple as taking a chill pill by accident!

Good character development and setting of the circumstances of their lives. All too familiar with the way we work to achieve something and find it takes away from the joy of life despite our success. The pills as a hook to bring them together again I found delightful. Top billing in my book.

I very much enjoyed the way the pill affected Pam, and the prospects for the future of her relationships... especially with Rick.

Nice job, well written.