All Comments on 'The Chosen Pt. 04B'

What a great series. I waited until now to make a comment. I have read all the chapters and enjoyed your talents. I'm looking forward to reading more. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Your narrative has all the ingredients of a sci-fi story and all the erotic narrative full of sexual tension required to keep the reader engaged and wanting more. Literotica must establish a new category for talent such and yours !! Congrats! Well done!

Would make a great movie

Are you planning to write Ice World series???

Good read!

FDD

Good!!!

Any updates for Ice World story?

Creative in many aspects: erotic, frustrating, intellectual, thought-provoking, and out of the accepted norms of delivered fantasies. Keep writing, I'm following

when are you going to write the sequel? If you aren't going to do it let us know because I'm sure I'm not the only one wanting to read it.

Great story, waiting for the sequel 'Ice World'.

Bummer of an ending for the remaining earthlings. I was so hoping that the Shaka would somehow get their comeuppance. But, oh well. At least the stories left-behind protagonists got to have a sexual event before the lights went out. Was also glad the dogs got beamed up too. Would probably need them on the Ice World. Now, on to the follow up story (there better be one).

I too agree you definitely need to do a sequel The Ice World seems a logical title. Surely, with their new abilities and with the help of the aliens that help them they could develop superior weaponry to reclaim earth. Revenge is Sweet