All Comments on 'The Christmas Accident'

by meathead96

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Gift

Nice story. Is there more?

meathead96meathead96over 13 years agoAuthor
Thinking about it

Considering making a full length story from it, possibly a novel, that will both lead up to it (previous year) and continue from the point of the crash if I get enough interest. If anyone would like to see more, comment or pm me and let me know.

Thank you anon for your comment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More please

This is nice I would like to read more about them

BigPopsBigPopsover 13 years ago
Continue, please

start with right after the ER, but if you must build it up, do so, but not too long of a build up

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Way too short

Continue with the development

meathead96meathead96over 13 years agoAuthor
Working on development as requested

Thank you for leaving your comments. I will start to work on more of this story, and I'll try to have it posted by first of december. Thank you again for your votes!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good chance to work in

Earlier schoolgirl play, tittie play, mastrubation etc. All those things that make daddys want to fuck their sexy little cock tease daughters. The girls want it from their dads too, so what's the problem with it anyway?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice read

Real nice. Continue on with it, Please.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
A little short, but a complete story

An enjoyable read, erotic and well written. It made sense to fuck to stay warm, it is a good way to get the blood flowing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Guess I didn't buy into the concept of what happened

so it didn't do anything for me. Seems like you could use an editor yourself by the way. If English is not your first language then you've done quite well after all. The cadence of your writing "sounds" German in some places. I'm probably wrong.

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