All Comments on 'The Christmas Gift'

by friskycharlene

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Although the story had a ring of believability ---

it was not a pleasant story-A drunk father taking his daughters virginity with no fore play simply is NOT sexy

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Loved it !

Great to read a different story , what a pleasure. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Stupid Story

Was a pretty lame story.

im_invisible69im_invisible69over 16 years ago
Interesting

It's always interesting and fun to read a story where the author is stretching oneself. I think this is such a story. It is well written and kept me interested throughout. Well done. Now it's time to read some more stories from this beautiful lady.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Well written on a difficult subject--at least for me. I enjoyed and hope you continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice story

Liked the story, and the writing. Good luck in the competition

My best wishes

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
It just doesn't work that way

Nice try but... Read up on how ED drugs function. They don't make you horny or give you wood, they just allow you to maintain it. If you take it and never get aroused, you might not even notice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Like the pizza guy fantasy is possible

For people who complain about how stories aren't real, how immoral they are, how irresponsible they are, I have a few things to say... The pizza guy NEVER gets to have sex (and all the other porn scenarios are just as fake), immoral? You're on a porn site -- you're just as guilty as any writer... It's FANTASY, irresponsibility is the natural order in fantasy otherwise it isn't sexy!

This is a fun story. It's fantasy and sometimes in fantasy you have to suspend reality to accept things... Oh wait, that's the definition of fantasy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
GREAT STORY

Don't listen to most of the others. I liked it and got very worked up while reading it.

zipp2zipp2over 16 years ago
I liked it

it was nice to read your story. Keep it up

Ken NitsuaKen Nitsuaover 16 years ago
I'm sorry, but

however well-written this was, I couldn't get past the fact that the plot turns on someone giving someone else drugs without their knowledge. No matter what the motivation this is a stupid and dangerous thing to do. Apparently the narrator thought it was perfectly okay, and therefore she lost me from square one. Best, Ken

AhabscribeAhabscribeover 16 years ago
Fun Read

I like your style of prose, relaxed and direct and naughty. A sexy little Christmas story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Actually, the Pizza Guy does get laid sometimes...

Just thought you'd like to know... How do I know? Hey, I'm the pizza guy!

ricksouzaricksouzaover 13 years ago
sweet

what a sweet little story. It made me smile to think of momma finally getting laid -- ooops! being made love to.

larrydownunderlarrydownunderabout 12 years ago
HOT

Loved this story and had me hard as

adSolitude1964adSolitude1964over 5 years ago
Lovely

Such a lovely story...

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