by friskycharlene
it was not a pleasant story-A drunk father taking his daughters virginity with no fore play simply is NOT sexy
It's always interesting and fun to read a story where the author is stretching oneself. I think this is such a story. It is well written and kept me interested throughout. Well done. Now it's time to read some more stories from this beautiful lady.
Well written on a difficult subject--at least for me. I enjoyed and hope you continue writing.
Liked the story, and the writing. Good luck in the competition
My best wishes
Nice try but... Read up on how ED drugs function. They don't make you horny or give you wood, they just allow you to maintain it. If you take it and never get aroused, you might not even notice.
For people who complain about how stories aren't real, how immoral they are, how irresponsible they are, I have a few things to say... The pizza guy NEVER gets to have sex (and all the other porn scenarios are just as fake), immoral? You're on a porn site -- you're just as guilty as any writer... It's FANTASY, irresponsibility is the natural order in fantasy otherwise it isn't sexy!
This is a fun story. It's fantasy and sometimes in fantasy you have to suspend reality to accept things... Oh wait, that's the definition of fantasy!
Don't listen to most of the others. I liked it and got very worked up while reading it.
however well-written this was, I couldn't get past the fact that the plot turns on someone giving someone else drugs without their knowledge. No matter what the motivation this is a stupid and dangerous thing to do. Apparently the narrator thought it was perfectly okay, and therefore she lost me from square one. Best, Ken
I like your style of prose, relaxed and direct and naughty. A sexy little Christmas story!
Just thought you'd like to know... How do I know? Hey, I'm the pizza guy!
what a sweet little story. It made me smile to think of momma finally getting laid -- ooops! being made love to.