All Comments on 'The Christmas Party'

Huh??

Ignore the he-man woman haters in the thread. They belong in Loving Wives which has sadly become a BTB playground for incels and bitter divorced guys constantly living out the same boring as fuck revenge fantasies again and again.

The issue is your writing and pacing. Just keep working at capturing the feeling you're going for but tease it out a bit more. Provide more will she won't she ambiguity. Take that string of erotic tension and stretch it out way more so you keep the reader on edge.

The writer really does hate men. Praises sluts and whores and encourages cuckolding. The writer fits in really well here.

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you're too stupid to breathe. If you wrote it, it's yours. Take responsibility for the shit you shovel you stupid pig.

Dan is a pathetic cuck-1*

"I'll say it is his?" That is the one statement that should have had Dan say out loud. "Go ahead and get knocked up. I'll be seeing the lawyer on Monday." Then walk out and tell Evan's wife what he heard.

He might have privately fantasized about his wife screwing but risking a pregnancy? Total crap.

Realistic and hot!

Wtf,,, cuck bull crap

He needs to bring a very well hung black”friend” home and introduce him to his wife. Then sit back and watch her really get a taste for big cocks. I would have him over at least weekly letting her find out what being a real slut is like. Nine of his friends can keep her pinned to the bed with her leg spread till they’re tired of her. The whole time he can ask her if how she likes being a slut now. Let them do what they want.

stupid beyond words.

good start, maybe some oral when they get home? LOL

Femdom agitprop in a bathroom stall.