All Comments on 'The Chronicle'

by Baztrachian

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chytownchytown2 months ago

*****If only!!!!! Thanks for sharing this fun good feeling read.

Lector77Lector772 months ago

A little loopy, but a nice, thought provoking fantasy.

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Different. Why all the bullshit references to being able to carry firearms and anyone who objected being ‘Ashed’. No one would need a firearm in the new society. Following the NRA playbook?

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Nice story, a good wish to have. It would truly sort this world out from all what I would call stupid and dumb. Funnily, I watched a program in the UK called red dwarf. In it it had a prison that had no guards, why? Because if an inmate attempted to harm another they died by the means used. Stopped all violent behaviour, leaving only the peaceful. We can dream but with the thick ones that are on this world I doubt it will happen in our lifetime.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I like the concept, but I think people would just die out because there is a lack of motivation to exist. The lack of challenge.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Not bad. Think of this as more SciFi & Fantasy than Non-Erotic. The "idea" is quite interesting.

Pincher73Pincher732 months ago

If only the world was a better place. I liked the story.

onlythelonelyloveonlythelonelylove2 months ago

And I wonder if you are the last creative one? After all, creation is intimately tied up in destruction that is wrought when the new come into being. So, I take it that animals are not eliminated when they kill because they do so out of necessity. Is there a place to do harm when it needs to be done? Say, to stop someone committing suicide?

We often talk about the end of history. This happens when there is nothing that generates the conflict the moves or is systemic to the notion of history. After all, if I am an artist or entrepreneur then my discoveries or creativity can harm others by sending them out of business! So, why haven’t the aliens worked out that they have destroyed the very thing that they value about humans? I think that the concept of competition is not distinct from the will to power but coexists with this idea. You would have to do more I think to offer a new paradigm based on a form of cooperation that allows for progress in a way that works harmoniously with earth and the beings in it and on it and beneath and above… as it stands we harm others UNINTENTIONALLY—and it appears that people are dusted in such circumstances. And since kids can get dusted… well, what about two -four year olds?

Thank you for the read.

Cheers

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Pure unadulterated fantasy....I loved it. Except for the loss of the first emissary the most we could possibly hope for as a species.

Rbtctrl1957Rbtctrl19572 months ago

This is AWESOME!! Wish it could be so.

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