All Comments on 'The Chronicles of Hvad Ch. 14'

You're certainly going to "stretch" Borna's anticipation and planning abilities!

Rasiph's one interesting older fellow and I love what he added to the story in Izumyr. It would indeed be something if you brought Dulo along to fight later, as you seem to leave that door open. Nice history on Izumyr from Rasiph, to explain why they hadn't yet attacked Hvad. Fascinating opportunity lies in the Izumyrian's enemies to the south and southeast for sure--and the insinuation is they would be more than a match for the Izumyrians.

I so enjoy this story. You hinted at Payl already delivering the baby, so what are the chances it's a beautiful and bright girl?

What a great ride and what an engaging story. 5. :)

Basically what the comment title says. This is as great as always. Which means it is pretty damn good.

Though now I think I "know" who the Izumyrians are based on. They remind me slightly of the post Christianisation Hungarians, or Bulgarians.

Draw you in just enough to be disappointed that it ends...

I greatly appreciate your quick pace to publish, but at this point the chapters can’t come fast enough. It’s a thoroughly engaging tale, and your narrator is a man I would want to be friends with. Thank you.

‘Spern, another great chapter. Can’t wait for the next one

So intense...

Because I am reading this in Sept 2020 after the last chapter was posted at the end of June, I have the foresight of knowing only one more chapter remains. That is further reason that I found Dulo (in my opinion only because after all, this is not my story) a diversion and a waste of time and words. I also don't understand why, with Payl at home and pregnant, you would add the drama of 'another woman'!

After 13 5* chapters, I don't understand how you decided on this one - 2*