by AspernEssling
Wow so emotional and way to graphic but I have to ask where are you heading my friend 😊 the thought of you turning to George R Martin seems possible with each story now.Thanks as always 5 🌟
LOVE Guenna, Yevna and Tanguiste. They are so tough as females. However, I am so incredibly saddened by Veran losing one eye, Iarn and Meonwe. ALL of that is going to hurt for a LONG time.
I should have seen Bacho's betrayal coming, but NOTHING prepared me for Harelip's and Firebush's. You concealed that well, and raping Meonwe made all that so much more poignant. I didn't expect you to intensify the tale so fast.
I hope you'll have ch 3 up quickly, as that's a mother-of-all-cliffhangers. 5
Yevna biting her way through that leather strap amazed me, as no 10-year-old I know would have that level of determination. Tanguiste already showed she was the strategist, and Guenna...still a sweetie and quite the supporter.