All Comments on 'The Circus Comes to Town'

However, I think you made it too easy to determine which of the 4 girls was the first nun.

Great concept, loved it all although I really wished there were more! Serena feels the most interesting actually, a hyper-rich CEO who loves degradation to that extend? I wouldn't mind a spin-off in that direction actually, where she has to balance her work with her kinks.

As usual, you are showing a great imagination. Please don't make us wait two more months.

I always wonder what your next story will be after I finish one, you really have such a vivid and varied imagination. Hope to see more of your talent soon!

I really enjoy reading this story. Hope read a sequel soon about the four girls act in the epilogue!

Overall great story, but feels unfinished. Like when you build a house - you pay special attention to the floors and walls, but the roof is just thrown up in hope, that it will stay there and it will be possible to live in that house...

I don't know about others, but I didn't really understand, who was the girl, that performed - only 4 names appear in this story and those are the one's that didn't perform (they do in the epilogue). Was it meant that way? I'm confused. That's why I think part 2 would be nice :)

Love the story. Wish there will be more.

Looking at the most recent comment, the performer nun is one of the four girls. Not too obvious at first but I like how the author have given hints at a few places within the story. Would be even better if the hints didn't narrow it down to just one girl and leave a tiny bit for the reader to guess in the end.

This needs a part 2