by brian473317
I don't care how orwhy he hired them. Start when hefirst gets sexually attracted.
Don't listen to that last guy it was a good start I liked it. Some people just can’t appreciate good buildup in a story. Looking foreword to the next chapter keep up the good work.
C'mon she said she would be back with Mihn and it's left
There. We need to Follow-Up and see where the Sister's take him and if He get's Both on the Same Day.
Simple, but in a good sense.. The story kept me in it's grip during chapter one and two.. the last one I will leave for a special moment.
The action with the girls gave me goose skin and made me leak constantly.. Just the thing I was looking for, after some fantasies with an asian girl showed up from nowhere. ;) A constantly horny guy's dream come true :)
...it's almost a bit too childish to the point of being a little too hard to believe, as when he stands over her head to take the pen and she can look up to see his penis. It's also a little bit of a hard sell to see her taking off her top to clean the oven, as Chinese ladies are very traditional and very reserved. I do realize it's fantasy, however.
I love the idea, but still stand by it being a little too "easy" with the sisters. 4*