All Comments on 'The Cleaning Lady Ch. 02'

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C_frommnC_frommnover 14 years ago
Great 2nd Chapter

Ping and Minh are a great team Hope you keep this Story going for a while

zl00pedragl0verzl00pedragl0verover 8 years ago
Cleaning sheilas

I want a team of four of them , all comfy with my fetish !! Exquisite story !!

Comentarista82Comentarista82about 8 years ago
Love the idea, yet...

...still seems a bit too childish. Hot, but doesn't seem quite believable even for fiction since sisters tend to get quite jealous of the other.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Oh Wow!

I discovered this series last night, and I'm enthralled by it; Nicholas is one lucky character, getting to please (and be pleased by) two lovely young Chinese ladies. I only hope Chapters 3 and 4 are just as enticing...

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 6 years ago
SOOOOOOOOOOO HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love the slow build-up and the passion!

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