All Comments on 'The Closet Surprise'

I like the way he build up the story line and the action is just super, looking forward the next part.

Very well written,can't wait for chapter 2

I liked the story line and it was pretty damn descriptive, definately got me hard. but it's a lttle long and the surprize was too pre dick able.

A little long, but great story.

A LITTEL LONG BUT STILL VERY GOOD

Dear Rocky,

I loved the story. I can't see how Steven will be able to keep his hands off his Mother Linda in part 2. I think he would end the relationship with Arlene just to have a chance on bedding his sexy Mother again. I think Steven would be so good to his Mother and not bring the Closet Surprise up until it's time for Mother and Son to become LOVERS!

Jim

So fuckin good

Sounds like you had a lot of fun xx

Wonderful story. So glad I found your story. Please provide us with a second chapter.

wish it had been completed!!!

More please, like a Mother fucking son the next morning, or holiday secrets revealed or Son marries lover and all three fuck forever.

Loved it, felt so real and sensuous between Mother and Son!! Part 2 has to be written, please!! Stephen comes home and his ass is soar from Arlene's dildo, Mother tries to help Steven by rubbing Vaseline lotion on his ass. Steven rolls over his erect cock hits his Mother's cheek, she can't resist and begins to suck her horny son, she takes her robe off and joins her son in a 69 on his bed. Steven eventually puts his sexy mother on all fours and fucks her crazy! Both now can moan and groan for mother and son, and not worry about what they say. They make love all day

How is Linda going to keep her son Steven's cock down after that experience with his own mother? Linda wants to set things straight with her son, Steven 's hormones will be raging for mommy! In part 2, Steven will obey his Mother's wishes to not have any more sex with her. He will be so tormented knowing his mother is great in bed but will respect her wishes. Eventually it will be Linda who gives in to her incestuous desires after seeing her son with a girlfriend. Linda and her son will become passionate lovers in part 2 and she even gets pregnant willingly for her son!