All Comments on 'The Club'

But this was just dumb. Did you bother to proof read this?

Thanks and sorry you didn't like it!

hope you continue. It was a very nice start.

I enjoyed this story.

All I'll say is "I'll have what she's having".

I liked it. It was well written, your story is a mix of sci-fi/fantasy/transgender, it was a little confusing in the middle durning the change section of the story. Is there a part two?

Very good and we'll written I like the slow transition

Do hope there is more, maybe some explanations

That was a seriously beautiful story. You managed to catch the essence and describe the reality of a first time perfectly. The want, the nerves, being sure yet unsure at the same time and best of all is you described a caring man who didn’t just want the old wham bam thank you ma’am crap that so many college students think that is the not just the cool way to act but also the proper way to get themselves off and not give a crap about their partners. I really love and appreciate your storytelling.