All Comments on 'The Club'

A great story with wonderful 'what's happening' tension. I loved it.

This is my first venture into this category and I really liked this story. Gave you a 5.

Can't really suggest a way to improve, but of course we both know it isn't perfect. Keep writing!

Nice effort princess11

Add a few more chapters.

Very hot. I think that the anonymity of the participants is what made the scene so erotic. A huge turn on.