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All Comments on 'The Club Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great story but inconsisant

She took a cab to get there but drove home.

How did that happen 

MainlinerMainlinerover 13 years ago
Gain a car

She took a cab and got out a few blocks from the club and after sex in the ladies room, she left the club and went back to the car and smiled as she drove home.

Does anyone proof read their stories???

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
You have potential

You do however desperately need an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Story line?

She went to the club in a taxi and she leaves the club , gets in her car and drives home? Did I miss something there?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Inconstant story.

Lacked concentration. She said she went to the club in a cab. But when she left she got in her car and drove home?

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