by RetroFan
Has a pretty good feel for some of the issues current in the period and a good story line. Only a couple of minor points; NHS contributions should have covered most of prescription charges. Normally POSH is claimed to stem from P&O shorthand travelling out to India & back to the UK Rather than to America (shady side for most of the trip).
A few typos/word mixups, but easy enough to figure out what was meant. Well placed for the times and political climate, with a good background on the main characters. The Leicester City reference was smashing.
... Particularly tied to the Lord Lucan thing. Perhaps they both went in a Rusian submarine.
Here's a thought. Write about ANYTHING other than SPOILED ROTTEN BITCHES. In other words, normal wonen.
Spoiled by the crap about condoms ha should have is just shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected p[sh bitches pussy