All Comments on 'The Coffee Shop'

very well written, compelling, suspenseful, and dare I say HYPNOTIC!! This is definetly an "E" level story, bravo to you!!

GREAT story, read it through rock hard from page 3 on. More, please.

Well written, keeps one scrolling to find out what will happen next, admirable character development, and well edited with only a handful of typos in the entire story. Looking forward to more from this "hot" author!

This story is I am sure the start of something great. It has a little bit of everything in here there is some romance in the bloom, sex, hypnosis all the best things that a story needs :) I love the characters and how Paul sticks to his morality. I cant wait to read more this story makes me come back for more and more.

Just finished the Coffee shop and it's really a great piece, if your into hot men being hypnotised you will love this but more than that it is a surprisingly well written story. The characters are real and while it is incredibly hot, you really get to the know the characters. It is well worth the read. You can feel the author's care in writing it. As an added bonus if you like men in suits you wil love this.

A very well written story and a bit of a heart wrencher. I felt soooo bad for Paul when Steve and Jack found each other.

This is a very good read man! It was amazing. Enjoyed it dearly

Wow! really hot. Cops and strippers turn me on and this sure did!!

Nice. I hope that Paul finds what he's looking for in the new cop.

Please write more on this (I know it is just fiction, but so what; nicely written.)

So we’ll written and captivating. Eroticism flows seamlessly within the larger context of a fascinating story. I never felt the usual rush to “get to the good stuff”. On every level, it was all good stuff!