All Comments on 'The Coffee Shop Ch. 02'

please keep writing! can't wait to see more.

nice character intro-

So we have it, her reason to be in Maine. Mother, therapist or lover? Well done. Excellent visual word pictures, can almost hear the crunching gravel underfoot. Quietly waiting for your next chapter...by the fire. Many thanks for your fine efforts.

I was completely immersed in this story as I read it. The storm scene was so well written that I could see, feel and hear it all so vividly in my head.

And I LOVE how you had Peyton rescue Caleb. That’s something I don’t see very often in romantic stories! It really does give the story something unique, rather than the usual male rescues female-which is something I am guilty of doing myself. :P I enjoy reading stories with strong females in them!!

So many things I am curious about-like why Caleb is in the position he is in, psychologically. I wonder how she will help him heal? And I also wonder what their relationship will be like, and how it will all work out for them. I know there's an age difference between them, though, so I wonder how that will affect them.

You're really doing an exceptional job and I can't wait to read more.

I excitedly await the continuation of this story.