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Click hereI think I'll take both files home and let Rochelle decide which one we should work on next. She'll be happy to have another case to work on, and when Rochelle's happy...
Well, she just called my cell phone and said she had something special to show me when the got home. As soon as I hung up, my phone beeped that I had a text message.
The text message was from Rochelle and it had an attachment. The text message said the attachment was one of those pictures that the younger crowd calls "NSFW". I'm not really sure what "NSFW" means, but what Rochelle was doing in the picture told me it means I need to be sure to leave work on time.
Nice story but no passion involved. Maybe find a different site for your non-erotic writing.
At one point the writer got "Cookeville" mixed up with "Crossville" something very easy to do if one is not from the area. Happened to me frequently when I lived in NC and traveled to Nashville occasionally.
I know this might a little bit off the mark, but I got confused. Not a whole lot, just a little bit. I have a problem with remembering names and So I re-read the confusing part a couple of times. Got it finally. Great story. Didn't see the ending until the end. Too many twists and turns. Made my head hurt. :(
Rochelle and Richard make a good team. Each looks at the case from a different perspective.
Another story I would not adverse to reading. Just so you know. You could have a series of whodunits like Hart to Hart or McMillan and wife.
Just for the record, sir, I loved everything about it. Complete with misdirection and headache.
5 Stars of course
Take Care.