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I think I'll take both files home and let Rochelle decide which one we should work on next. She'll be happy to have another case to work on, and when Rochelle's happy...
Well, she just called my cell phone and said she had something special to show me when the got home. As soon as I hung up, my phone beeped that I had a text message.
The text message was from Rochelle and it had an attachment. The text message said the attachment was one of those pictures that the younger crowd calls "NSFW". I'm not really sure what "NSFW" means, but what Rochelle was doing in the picture told me it means I need to be sure to leave work on time.
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Tigr23 months agoNice story but no passion involved. Maybe find a different site for your non-erotic writing.
Anonymous5 months agoAt one point the writer got "Cookeville" mixed up with "Crossville" something very easy to do if one is not from the area. Happened to me frequently when I lived in NC and traveled to Nashville occasionally.
Fandeboris5 months agoI know this might a little bit off the mark, but I got confused. Not a whole lot, just a little bit. I have a problem with remembering names and So I re-read the confusing part a couple of times. Got it finally. Great story. Didn't see the ending until the end. Too many twists and turns. Made my head hurt. :(
Rochelle and Richard make a good team. Each looks at the case from a different perspective.
Another story I would not adverse to reading. Just so you know. You could have a series of whodunits like Hart to Hart or McMillan and wife.
Just for the record, sir, I loved everything about it. Complete with misdirection and headache.
5 Stars of course
Take Care.
WilCox495 months agoVery good story. It's a little too complicated; I think (viewing it as a real case) the crime and coverup would have fallen apart long before. Still, in the end, no one part of it is beyond possibility. (Barring the pharmaceutical details, which someone has already questioned--but no doubt a slightly different drug could have been found.)
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SOMEBODY has to try to deal with the unsolved cases. I'm enjoying your stories involving them. Thank you for keeping them going.
technofrog20025 months agoIt was quite a trail of clues to this story, I really enjoyed reading it. As to the reader, who is inquiring about why is crime on Literotica; there are a lot of crime stories on Lit as well as non erotic stories, so I don’t understand why the reader is questioning this.
Anonymous5 months agoA good story with a nice twist. As an anaesthetist (or anesthesiologist as its known in the US!) your use of suxamethonium (also known as succinylcholine) is incorrect. It does indeed paralyse a person for about 10-15 minutes but it paralyses ALL muscles including the diaphragm of the lungs which means the person is suffocating whilst fully awake until they lose consciousness and then die or become brain injured. A better drug to use to render someone immobile but remain alive would be high dose ketamine or an antipsychotic like haloperidol.
Anonymous5 months agoWhich of your earlier stories is this s sequel to? I have read it but can't recall the name.
Thanks...
