All Comments on 'The Cold Sun's Son Ch. 001'

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Man.. it seems like a good start to a great adventure story..keep writing... don't let the story die like many others on this site

Keep writing and increase chapter length

Excellent beginning....however.... and, I intend no offense, but you could seriously use some help on grammatical editing. That being said, you have built a foundation from which to explore many interesting avenues, so I look forward to what’s coming next :-)