All Comments on 'The Collaring of Chloe Ch. 01'

This has nothing to do with polyamory. In any event, polyamory is just a polite name for polyfuckery.

I grant you that this CHAPTER has no polyamory in it, but the rest of them do. :) This is but the first chapter of many. I already have 16 written, it just takes a long time for Literotica to publish them. :)

A little slow but a pretty good start.hope to read more soon.

This was originally posted on another site as just journal entries. The first three chapter came back to back, so a bit happened quickly among those three. However, Literotica takes about 4-5 days to format my submitted chapters and I didn't want to A: submit a bunch of chapters at once and have them get published out of order or B: submit all 16 chapters as a single document and have no one willing to read it because it was just too much at once. I hope everyone that is reading likes it as it develops. I am working on Chapters 17 & 18 currently and am submitting a chapter every time the previous one gets published. Hopefully, by the time the rate of publishing catches up to the current chapters, I'll have about a good 20 chapters in the bag for everyone.

I enjoyed the first chapter. I hope it doesn't take long for the next ones to be approved and published. I don't like having to wait long for the next chapter. Let's just say, I'm NOT a very patient person...when I want something, I want it yesterday. lol

I know what you mean. It's been really tedious with how long it takes for these to get published. I have Chapter pending already and will probably go ahead and get Chapter submitted tonight just to try and cut down the wait. I have considered just submitting all 16 chapters back to back, but I keep getting worried that they will get published out of order....

Regardless, thank you for your kind comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter and I hope you find that they get better as time goes on.

Slow and tedious. Neither fun or entertaining to read.

Sorry you didn't find it to your liking. Hopefully you will like further chapters. The first one was a bit of a slow start, I admit. Still, I don't expect that everyone will like my work. Thank you for your input regardless and thanks for at least giving it a try.

This first chapter sets a good start to a slavery theme that often is not met. My meaning is that there has be an established trust between a Dom and a sub. Chloe was fortunate to find a community that she could trust even though we do not have idea just what happened during the time before she left her town. Master Heron was a good start that he appreciated what he had and let Chloe experience what she could without setting her up for bad situations. It was a bit amusing that she set up a bank account just in case she changes her mind not to become a slave. Amusing in the sense that a slave does not have any choice. If something happens and she does not want to continue as a slave, what choice does she have? None in a simple way. She has to continue to be a slave until she dies or is sold or otherwise cast out by a master. This story has been going on for some time and there are many chapters to catch up on. I liked this first one so.....time for me to read on.

Thank you for your comments and thoughts. I am glad you seem to like it. Much of the story's subtext is in regards to Chloe's desire to be a 'real slave' and not want safety nets like the bank account that Master Herron set up for her. The idea was supposed to that, while he was willing to help her have her dream, he was trying to remain practical. I'm glad you found that to your liking.

With Chloe's story, I've tried to write it in a way that shows a very honest picture of the lifestyle. There are wild elements (like Mittens in general), but I've tried to make this story different from most other BDSM stories in that it's not focused on the sex, but on the relationships around the sex.

More, I've tried to write a commentary on the differences between the fantasy that is BDSM and the reality that we sometimes must compromise with. Part of that was the invention of having Chloe agree to being sold to an owner that she would have no ability to weigh in on, but with the consideration of having that owner chosen by someone she could trust to put her with someone who wouldn't abuse the situation.

We will meet Master Heron in greater detail soon, as well as the elusive Elly. Both of them are actually inspired on a couple I have known in real life (though not specifically based on). I hope you continue to enjoy the story as you read and continue find the way I have presented it to your liking.