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Click hereThe page instructed her to use the kiddie pool and nearby waterhose, capped in a sprayer nozzle, to thoroughly wash herself. She found a large fluffy towel in the bottom of the pool, on which was a tiny bottle of shampoo. Following the directions, she removed the towel to the chair, half-filled the little plastic pool with water, and stepped into it and knelt down to bathe herself. The water from the hose was brutally cold, instantly making her nipples into hard little knots on the end of her breasts. Regardless, she thoroughly rinsed herself with the frigid water, then used the shampoo to lather her hair and rub the lather about her body.
Despite the cold of the water, the slight embarrassment of being naked in some stranger's back yard, Chloe felt exhilarated. Her heart was thudding like a hammer in her chest, still anxious and nervous, but smiling and laughing. Somehow, this felt...right. She didn't feel like she needed to be afraid. There was a kind of playful feel here, yet also something commanding.
Once all the soap was rinsed away, she stepped from the kiddie pool and used the towel to dry herself. For a moment, she wondered if she should put the clothes back on, but the page had said nothing about doing so. For that matter, it had said nothing else at all but to wash herself. The thought that maybe there was some other instructions left nearby made her look around.
It was then she noticed that the rear door had been opened as some point. She felt sure that it had not been before she'd begun her task of washing herself, but now it sat partially open. A small note was attached to it with a little piece of tape, also something she was certain had not been there a moment before. She padded over to the door, feeling a chill air blow across her still damp and naked body. She leaned out to read the note.
'Come inside. Bring in the padlock with you.'
With a smile, she quickly moved back to the chair and retrieved the padlock, hefting it in her hand a moment before turning back towards the door. For a second, she felt certain that she had just caught sight of someone at the door, but it had been just the slightest flash of movement, not enough to be certain it was anything but her imagination. Taking a breath, Chloe walked to the door and entered into the house and into her new life.
- COMMENTS
MemoryofSnowover 3 years agoAuthorThank you for your comments and thoughts. I am glad you seem to like it. Much of the story's subtext is in regards to Chloe's desire to be a 'real slave' and not want safety nets like the bank account that Master Herron set up for her. The idea was supposed to that, while he was willing to help her have her dream, he was trying to remain practical. I'm glad you found that to your liking.
With Chloe's story, I've tried to write it in a way that shows a very honest picture of the lifestyle. There are wild elements (like Mittens in general), but I've tried to make this story different from most other BDSM stories in that it's not focused on the sex, but on the relationships around the sex.
More, I've tried to write a commentary on the differences between the fantasy that is BDSM and the reality that we sometimes must compromise with. Part of that was the invention of having Chloe agree to being sold to an owner that she would have no ability to weigh in on, but with the consideration of having that owner chosen by someone she could trust to put her with someone who wouldn't abuse the situation.
We will meet Master Heron in greater detail soon, as well as the elusive Elly. Both of them are actually inspired on a couple I have known in real life (though not specifically based on). I hope you continue to enjoy the story as you read and continue find the way I have presented it to your liking.
Anonymousover 3 years agoThis first chapter sets a good start to a slavery theme that often is not met. My meaning is that there has be an established trust between a Dom and a sub. Chloe was fortunate to find a community that she could trust even though we do not have idea just what happened during the time before she left her town. Master Heron was a good start that he appreciated what he had and let Chloe experience what she could without setting her up for bad situations. It was a bit amusing that she set up a bank account just in case she changes her mind not to become a slave. Amusing in the sense that a slave does not have any choice. If something happens and she does not want to continue as a slave, what choice does she have? None in a simple way. She has to continue to be a slave until she dies or is sold or otherwise cast out by a master. This story has been going on for some time and there are many chapters to catch up on. I liked this first one so.....time for me to read on.
MemoryofSnowabout 7 years agoAuthorSorry you didn't find it to your liking. Hopefully you will like further chapters. The first one was a bit of a slow start, I admit. Still, I don't expect that everyone will like my work. Thank you for your input regardless and thanks for at least giving it a try.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoSlow and tedious. Neither fun or entertaining to read.
MemoryofSnowabout 7 years agoAuthorI know what you mean. It's been really tedious with how long it takes for these to get published. I have Chapter pending already and will probably go ahead and get Chapter submitted tonight just to try and cut down the wait. I have considered just submitting all 16 chapters back to back, but I keep getting worried that they will get published out of order....
Regardless, thank you for your kind comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter and I hope you find that they get better as time goes on.
