All Comments on 'The Collector 01'

Brilliant!

can't wait for more and more of your journal entry submissions!

Probably THE best debut story I have ever read. Hope that more will follow at this level of quality.

Very very hot story, Impressive debut, and for a guy, like me, who is obsessed with blowjobs and knows how to recreate each one in a story I think you are already top notch at that and will be right up there with the best if you keep par with this wook.

Simply wonderful

it's great, i loved it, especially because i too share the adiction to blowjobs, but there is that little something that is missing, that little something that made you give here nine out of ten.. i'd have given you 90 out of 100, but since it's not possible you'll have to be satisfied with 75

i tell you, great writing, but there was that something missing which made it not be worthy of a 100

i think it was the fact she didn't let you come in her mouth, for me too, without it, a blowjob (and by extention the story of it) cannot be perfect..

I love giving blowjobs and there is nothing hotter than reading a blowjob story. I can't explain how hot it makes me!