All Comments on 'The Comforts of Winter'

by AlyceInJeans

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

this is so cute! love it!

FandeborisFandeboris8 months ago

A wonderful tale of two women looking for something in their lives and finding it. Grabbed a hanky for this one.

Take care

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

This is really well written and well thought out, thank you. It would be good to read about more of the backstory of both characters.

SirDigbyChickenCaesarSirDigbyChickenCaesar7 months ago

An excellent first. I'm a sucker for good dialogue; it's a simple plot, but the language lifts it that head and shoulders above. A few passages almost seem iambic.

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I have been writing for many years, including erotica, but this is the first time I have published erotica anywhere.