All Comments on 'The Commute'

You ruined a potentially good story with the forced sex. She was willing but he had to degrade her. There is more to sex than forcing yourself onto a woman and degrading her

Shame you had to act like a rapist. The girl was willing. You treated her like shit. Not good. No stars for you.

The story was badly written with a lot of misspelling and terrible grammar. Also 5he main character was obnoxious!

I knew a girl in Italy named Jackie and it was her fantasy I wrote about although I don't get a kick out of rough sex or force sex. I left the story just the way I wrote it in one night for her to read the next time on the bus. After all a gentleman always tries to please the lady. I should have edited it or asked someone to do so. But I was just wondering if anyone but her liked it. By the way I was rewarded by one person (Jackie) so it isn't all that bad a story. Maybe I'll redo it the way I wanted it. Me as the handsome strong gentleman that sweeps the young lady off her feet.

It wasn't suppose to be a love story, more B & M. A girl I knew actually gave me the idea so I wrote it for her. Sorry if there was any misspelled words. Me Bad