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All Comments on 'The Complete Adventures of Quinn'

by jlorthia

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Very good story, but...

Too many grammar, syntax and word choice errors to earn 5 stars.

jlorthiajlorthiaabout 8 years agoAuthor
I understand there may be a few gramatical/syntax errors or bad word choices.

I will most likely edit the story again in a couple of months as I continue to improve as a writer. I would like to state though that this version of the story is a lot better than its original iteration : )

SeashElSeashElover 6 years ago
Holy shit.....

Full circle, awesome plot reveals, comeuppances and conclusion. 5 stars, Grammar be damned.

jlorthiajlorthiaover 6 years agoAuthor
JL Orthia

Thank you for the positive feedback!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved it. I would buy the movie

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