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thebug37thebug37almost 9 years ago
A Perfect Woman

Nicely done, and the treatment of words in describing the beauty of Rachel. This story deserved the five star rating I gave you for the non-graphic sex, other than to illustrate the love and care when the 'date' was loving this individual. Thanks.

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