All Comments on 'The Concert Ch. 01'

by FloydtheBarber

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Very good start.

I enjoyed this story & I hope you will continue it soon.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 14 years ago
Really short

What will probably a good hot story the first chapter left the story kind of hanging in mid air.

I hope that the second chapter moves the story along to some serious fucking.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Good start

Although it was a bit too short, the story is a good start. Please continue it.

clive_iluvnycclive_iluvnycalmost 14 years ago
Great beginning

Great start to a very promising story. Lots of ways this could go. Will be watching for the next part. Thanx for your contribution.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Hey Going

Great start looking forward to another part or two

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Taking of well - barber

A good start. I wish you could include some exhibitionism, gang banging etc. Then she goes to her barber for a haircut and ends up fucking him. and he begins shaving her pussy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
cant wait

cant wait to read more , hard already

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
More cumming I hope

Looking forward to some serious fucking in your next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Charger Days

MMMMmmmmmmmm very nice beginning and I'm sure it will end up that way. At least you have us hanging and waiting and that's 5 star to me no doubt. Very good.......will be waiting for the rest with anticipation.

EmpLucianDarkBladeEmpLucianDarkBladeover 11 years ago
not a bad start

Keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
it's always good news

when a mother notices and smiles at the big fat hard on in her boy's pants. And lots more moms notice and admire what their kid's got hard under his fly than people realize. It makes their motherly cunt nice and tingly.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 3 years ago

Good story so far. Nice to see mother and son have something in common. Also good that they realize each other is a person.

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