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Anonymousover 13 years ago

grinded

You are a fine erotic writer..win my 5 stars often, and i'm stingy with them.

But Please....the past tense of grind is ground, not grinded!

Every time i see " grinded" the narrative grinds to a halt for me; and no one would mistake me for an English major.

Otherwise, excellent stuff :happy humping.

KisstheGirl over 9 years ago

OMG!!

HOT HOT HOT!!! Hot steamy sex.... check! Two busty, vivacious, erotic women wanting to fulfill each other's fantasies..... check! HOT 3 way action.... CHECK!! LOVE IT!

Swebo almost 3 years ago

Bravo! Bravissimo!

Anonymousover 2 years ago

Very sexy

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