by michie
This story has nothing new. In fact it lacks of creativity. The writer did a very poor job on this story, which is incomplete by missing the day after/ aftermath.
This story is not enjoyable.
Nicely done. Very much sounded like a real life experience. Hope to read more from you:)
Why did she do this? Because he likes maths? The lack of motivation, the lack of angst, the lack of passion, the lack of guilt, it's all a bit flat.
Quite a good story, congratulations! Your mastery of the mechanics of grammar, syntax, spelling and word usage are outstanding. This was a unique plot, with just the right amount of back story and hot sex. Do keep up the good work!
... another run-of-the-mill cheating wives story. So I stopped reading after she said she was the mother of two wonderful children,
Some folks say that there's something incomplete about this story ... how so? There's a backstory, a storyline (well thought out), and the main character is described well - to include her innermost thoughts. And the sex was very relatable and erotic, too. If it's not your thing, then stop reading and move on.
It’s easy to read that you’re smart and literate. I liked the story, the guilt, and wonder if this wouldn’t end up being the first of many one night stands? Maybe she is offered a job where she must travel each week for business, getting her away from the drag and nag of homework battles.
I've read several of your stories and you're very good.!
could improve the math. Discussion of irrational numbers was a bit confused, the philosophical "number" being conflated with the "numeral" used to represent it.)
But never been as lucky as you. Great story
Another excellent story, beautifully told, and with that essential element of “truthiness”. Thank you again.