All Comments on 'The Conner Family Ch. 11'

A fine story sir . Thank you for your service . Keep up the good writing . You have a unique style .

This was a very good story, not just a wham bam thank you mam description of sex. My only negative thought, if you could call it that, is that the story would have received a far higher score had you posted it as one 20 page story instead of 11 individual chapters. Having said that, there is scope for more to this tale such, as Ken and Jen discovering that they are brother and sister and then tracing their family through DNA records. Hopefully you are well enough to consider adding to the story, if not then I guess it ends here. Thank you for what you have written to date and I hope you're health holds out for you.