All Comments on 'The Consequences of Spying'

Absolutely awesome. One of the best written and best developed plotlines I have read on here. I normally like blackmail/nonconsent with a smattering of incest thrown in. Maybe a reluctant cousin. But THIS! Wow! I thoroughly enjoyed.

I sooooo hope you continue this. Extreme orgasm denial competes with mind control as my favorite fetishes. Better still if he can condition her against her will with this method, lol.

Damn it was good

I really enjoyed the story. Extremely well told. Interesting build up and great descriptiveness. I see it's a couple of years old but I would love to see a second part as well. Keep writing.

I loved this! The plot was great, characters interesting and developed, sexy and erotic. I'm hoping you continue this - you've created a deep storyline and only told a portion of it. Please continue!