All Comments on 'The Contest Ch. 01'

by DreamerByTheDiamonds

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GrantLeeStone about 6 years ago

This is good! You deserve more comments!

I’m surprised this is the first comment. You write well. And this story is set up like a Fairy Tale or Fable. We have the Princess of Beauty, the Princess of Strength, and the Princess of Silence and Mystery. Maybe the third Princess represents Thought.

What is the Emperor? He is pale. He has a long, sensitive tail and horns, but he doesn’t have scales. He can be violent during sex, but also tender and loving. I hope that sex with each of the Princesses is part of the contest. BTW, the sex in this chapter was hot and strange. Kudos.

Anyway, good job. I’ve got a few more chapters to read already.

Anonymousover 5 years ago

One of your best!

1Complex plot

2 Good early character development

Early examples of your work lacked 1 and 2

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